Application letter to Montessori education

I noticed your profile and would like to offer you my project in editing for my son’s kindergarten application. 5 questions. answer, in total about 750 words.

please highlight all the areas that you change

Proofread and edit to make an excellent application

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Having attended DPS and DBS, I went through the conventional HK school system and later joined the Massachusetts Institute of Technology.

Even though I thrived in the HK system, looking back, I believe there are other ways to learn and to shape a child’s education.

My wife and I weren’t seeking a Montessori education, instead, we were looking for an alternative way for our child to learn that places priority on the whole child with emphasis on educating the soul and stimulating creativity; but not merely taking tests and getting good grades.

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